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Looks like you're on the right track there OP.

The only things I could suggest are:

1. Stick with Pole Grip. There's a reason you see people wearing it, it's the best one. Platinum Grip +1 is a godsend in certain situations combined with Soboro though.

2. Use that Osode for WS. It's been parsed plenty of times, it's the winner. It looks better on paper anyways, no reason to not use it.

3. In regards to an ammo piece, Tiphia Sting for the meantime, Black Tathlum in the future. If you don't want that attack/accuracy, then use a Lightning Bow +1 or maybe Ifrit's Bow if you can get your hands on it.

4. Either get a Forager's or Cuchulain's mantle. I personally use Cuchulain's, and I couldn't be happier with it. It's an amazing piece, because you won't find anything else in the game outside of augmented Forager's mantles that can compare with the stat buffs. And what else is going to give you 8 accuracy on a back piece? (converted for 2-handers)

Other than all that, you're doing pretty well. If you're happy with the Hachi Sune-ate route, then stick with it. I personally use Askar Manopolas + Hachi Sune-ate for the time being, but I'll be swapping to Dusk Gloves soon as well.