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Random Thoughts.....What are you thinking?
Bismarck.Misao
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By Bismarck.Misao 2013-04-17 17:21:03
a
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By Asura.Lokimaru 2013-04-17 17:21:13
C. None of the above
I don't like reading poetry
Ramuh.Urial
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By Ramuh.Urial 2013-04-17 17:23:31
C. None of the above
I don't like reading poetry Shame.
Could be worse you could be reading Paradise Lost.
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Bismarck.Magnuss
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2013-04-17 17:23:52
I don't like reading poetry Yeah? Well poetry doesn't like reading you!
Alexander.Drokin
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By Alexander.Drokin 2013-04-17 17:24:14
I was going to say, "Not A" because it used the word time three times in five lines, and I'm weird about seeing the same word repeat itself in writing.
But then I got to the end and the Procrastinator part made me like it anyway.
B does sound a bit more deep/dark, though.
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Asura.Vyre
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By Asura.Vyre 2013-04-17 17:25:16
RT help me.
Pick one of these two.
Panic sets in.
The time is almost upon me.
Many moons I had to prep,
All wasted with my kin.
Now the time ticks by,
More value to every second.
Time is now like gold,
And I’m merely a peasant.
But at this time,
I truly begin to shine.
No other time in the passing moons,
Have I felt as alive as now.
With energy anew,
I begin to hit my stride.
The task goes fast,
The time goes slow.
The task is great,
But I am greater.
Three tasks completed,
For I am the procrastinator.
Or
This cell is all I know,
The home of my confinement.
A life sentence I must serve,
Occasionally a break in silence.
With windows I peer out,
I examine others while they try to peek in.
They’re merely passing by,
Stopping out of curiosity.
Some may stay and talk a while,
Others visit every day.
Few come and ask me questions,
Trying to learn within the walls.
Others merely come to waste their time,
These I see most often.
Yet none have come to stay with,
In this asylum I’m alone.
Many try to enter,
I myself have tried to flee.
But this asylum is my home,
This cell is all I know.
Mmm, damn, the opening for B was so promising, but it died by the end. Therefore you must go with A.
Shiva.Arana
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By Shiva.Arana 2013-04-17 17:25:29
Bismarck.Misao
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By Bismarck.Misao 2013-04-17 17:25:33
AAAH! A BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
KEEL IT WITH FIRE!
(ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻
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By Asura.Lokimaru 2013-04-17 17:25:51
If I HAD to pick.
I'd pick B.
I dunno what Paradise Lost is but if it's a whole damn poetry book, I'm OUT :p
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By Bismarck.Dracondria 2013-04-17 17:27:46
Wasps are ***, bees aren't so bad
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By volkom 2013-04-17 17:28:26
Uri,~
B
Ramuh.Urial
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By Ramuh.Urial 2013-04-17 17:28:30
If I HAD to pick.
I'd pick B.
I dunno what Paradise Lost is but if it's a whole damn poetry book, I'm OUT :p More like one big *** poem/story.
Hooray for epics.
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By Shiva.Spathaian 2013-04-17 17:28:44
CHARGE!
*rides in on chocobo-back throwing water balloons at everyone*
Bismarck.Misao
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By Bismarck.Misao 2013-04-17 17:28:57
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Shiva.Arana
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By Shiva.Arana 2013-04-17 17:29:03
Bismarck.Magnuss
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2013-04-17 17:30:19
If I HAD to pick.
I'd pick B.
I dunno what Paradise Lost is but if it's a whole damn poetry book, I'm OUT :p More like one big *** poem/story.
Hooray for epics. It's technically a series of "books", but they're really more like chapters or parts. I need to read that whole thing someday. Hell, I don't have much going on this summer...
Ramuh.Urial
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By Ramuh.Urial 2013-04-17 17:30:21
RT help me.
Pick one of these two.
Panic sets in.
The time is almost upon me.
Many moons I had to prep,
All wasted with my kin.
Now the time ticks by,
More value to every second.
Time is now like gold,
And I’m merely a peasant.
But at this time,
I truly begin to shine.
No other time in the passing moons,
Have I felt as alive as now.
With energy anew,
I begin to hit my stride.
The task goes fast,
The time goes slow.
The task is great,
But I am greater.
Three tasks completed,
For I am the procrastinator.
Or
This cell is all I know,
The home of my confinement.
A life sentence I must serve,
Occasionally a break in silence.
With windows I peer out,
I examine others while they try to peek in.
They’re merely passing by,
Stopping out of curiosity.
Some may stay and talk a while,
Others visit every day.
Few come and ask me questions,
Trying to learn within the walls.
Others merely come to waste their time,
These I see most often.
Yet none have come to stay with,
In this asylum I’m alone.
Many try to enter,
I myself have tried to flee.
But this asylum is my home,
This cell is all I know.
Mmm, damn, the opening for B was so promising, but it died by the end. Therefore you must go with A.
I agree on those, my hopes are that in workshop B could become something better. When I'm allowed to take it form the 20 lines I was required and condense it to the 8-12 I truly wanted to write.
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Ragnarok.Raenil
By Ragnarok.Raenil 2013-04-17 17:30:48
CHARGE!
*rides in on chocobo-back throwing water balloons at everyone*
Cerberus.Valmur
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By Cerberus.Valmur 2013-04-17 17:31:13
Bismarck.Dracondria said: »Wasps are ***, bees aren't so bad
Don't see them in the UK anymore..plenty of wasps instead! /shrug
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By Asura.Lokimaru 2013-04-17 17:31:39
Rae, that is a nauseatingly fast gif. :<
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By Odin.Eikechi 2013-04-17 17:40:11
Turns out a buddy of mine is in the LS of the guy I overpaid for on the geode. He needed some synergy augs for his Armada berk. I got him 5STP and 3DA off 4 tries.... He's now more than happy to put in a word for me with his LS mate... Awww yeah :D
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Shiva.Arana
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By Shiva.Arana 2013-04-17 17:42:09
Alexander.Drokin
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By Alexander.Drokin 2013-04-17 17:49:20
I didn't see this one in lolpics.
*prepares to be hit by all the girls*
... Oh, who am I kidding? Not like it'd hurt anyway!
Bismarck.Magnuss
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2013-04-17 17:51:54
Ramuh.Urial
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By Ramuh.Urial 2013-04-17 17:54:46
2 hours left
All that remains is a sonnet...
/bashes face on s=desk
Must access my inner Shakespe....nope...DO NOT WANT!
Bismarck.Misao
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By Bismarck.Misao 2013-04-17 17:57:15
2 hours left
All that remains is a sonnet...
/bashes face on s=desk
Must access my inner Shakespe....nope...DO NOT WANT! Access your emo bard ~
Bismarck.Magnuss
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By Bismarck.Magnuss 2013-04-17 17:58:00
2 hours left
All that remains is a sonnet...
/bashes face on s=desk
Must access my inner Shakespe....nope...DO NOT WANT! You must do it. You must give in. Embrace the Shakespeare, let it flow through you.
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By Bismarck.Dracondria 2013-04-17 18:03:24
2 hours left
All that remains is a sonnet...
/bashes face on s=desk
Must access my inner Shakespe....nope...DO NOT WANT!
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By Bismarck.Dracondria 2013-04-17 18:23:57
New trailer for Man of Steel looks amazing
Ramuh.Urial
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By Ramuh.Urial 2013-04-17 18:25:46
Bismarck.Dracondria said: »2 hours left
All that remains is a sonnet...
/bashes face on s=desk
Must access my inner Shakespe....nope...DO NOT WANT!
I'd rather write a play than a sonnet any day....
That sonnet was ***, I know taht isn't making it in the final draft of the book....which is exactly why I made it ***! :D
This is a thread that I found on another website I post at. It can be really really interesting. I thought it deserved a place here.
Post your random thoughts for the day here, or anything else that intrigues you.
For starters, is it possible to give constructive critism to someone who doesn't have a neck? I totally just walked by a girl who didn't. Someone isn't getting a necklace for Valentines day!
And who decided black and white can't be colors? I want to say a racist. I really do.
Inb4thisthreadgetsreallywtf
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